Successful sport professionals can earn a great deal of money than people in other important professions. Some people think it is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The world of sport is a multimillion-dollar industry. Recently successful sport professionals can earn enormous amount of money than other peoples who contributes their efforts in various other important fields, like teachers, scientists, doctors and so on. Some argue that these huge salaries are highly justified, while others deem it as unfair.
On the one hand, various professions contribute to making our world run more smoothly. Teachers educate and inspire young people and their efforts produce responsible citizens of tomorrow. Social workers, nurses, and rescue individuals are facing ph...
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Sir... Thanks... Can you tell
Sir...
Thanks...
Can you tell me where is my gramatical mistakes...?
Tessy James
No grammatical mistakes
No grammatical mistakes found.
Good job, Tessy.
Sir.. In your comment it was
Sir..
In your comment it was written 7 grammer mistakes..
so i asked..
Thanks for replay.
Tessy James
Sorry about that. E-rater
Sorry about that. E-rater considered them errors, but they are not.
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.227 0.35
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