Lectures were the traditional way to teach large number of students in the past. Now new technology is being used to teach students. Is it a positive or negative development?
Teaching is the transferring of information from one to another. Presently, new technologies are being introduced to teach large number of students at the same time. I will discuss why I feel the technological intervention is a positive change in the field of education.
Education molds the individual and shapes the character of a person. Traditionally, teachers are the responsible persons who impart the knowledge to their students trough their lectures. Teachers are professionals, and are trained to handle the students. However, technological advancements changed the way of teaching learnin...
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Hai Sir.. The spelling
Hai Sir..
The spelling correction is : teaching
Thanks..
Tessy
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