In many part of the world, families were larger in the past because people had more children.
Do you think there were more advantages or disadvantages to being part of large family in the past?
Quantity of one family in the past was larger than today. My grandparents, for instance, have more than 8 children while my parents just have 3 children. Having the biggest family in the past had several advantages and disadvantages.
In my view, there were three benefits. The first, people who lived in big families were more sociable. Although they often met many members of family with different character, they did many things in togetherness. The second, each member would not feel lonely especially for the elder who spent most of their time in home. Usually they played with the youngest m...
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Suggestion: Refer to were and idleness
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Sentence Length SD: 4.126 7.5
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Attribute Value Ideal
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