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Many people believe that parents are not as close to their children as they used to be. Suggest some reasons why this could be true.
It is true, that nowadays many parents are so busy to spend time with their children. However, I think, that every problem has their solutions.
Parents and their children seem to be less close nowadays. Perhaps the main reason for this is that both parents often work full-time and therefore spend less time with their children. Whereas women traditionally stayed at home to cook, clean and look after children, many mothers now choose to work or are forced to do so. This means that children may be left alone, or with nannies or babysitters. Busy parents have less contact with their children an...
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No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
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No. of Characters: 1305 1500
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.083 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.694 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.368 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.999 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.366 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.532 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5