The map below is of the town of Garlsdown. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map describes the comparison of how to reach two supermarkets in Garlsdon city, the old and new supermarket.
From the picture, we can see that this city has total population approximately 65,000 people. This town consists of three regions, Brandson, Cransdon and Hindon.
To catch first supermarket which is located in countryside, there is just Hindon inhabitant can get it. The other reason, it is further than second supermarket to reach main road and railways. The second supermarket is the nearest area to get main road and railway. It is because it is located in town square and many citizens from Cransdon and Brandson can go there. Second supermarket can catch more customer than first supermarket.
In conclusion, the second supermarket is the best choice for shopping. It is because it is easy to be accessed by train and public or private transportation. Moreover, it is nearer to visit town center and the advantage is no traffic zone.
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