More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.
Do you agree or disagree?
The mushrooming number of immigrants from thriving to omnipotent nations in order to accomplish supreme employment opportunities has been a burning issue at present. A central question remains whether it is a ploy of developed nations to grab quality professionals from second world or a natural phenomenon. Here, I would like to discord with given statement.
There are multifarious points to endorse my views. First and foremost, hiking inflation, unemployment, corruption, crime, poverty have got on the nerves of people especially in developing countries. Therefore, migration of folk to seek o...
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sir , mistakes are less so I
sir , mistakes are less so I m happy but what could I do more to get 8.5 or 9.0 ??????
plzzz tell sir
We rarely gave users 8.5 or
We rarely gave users 8.5 or 9.0. Tessy James has over 120 essays, only two of them got 9.0. In testbig, 8.0 almost means top top.
We have tested some essays scored 8.0 from other IELTS sites and figured out that they are much less than 8.0 according to testbig standard, even though those essay are written by native writers and no doubt they are very professional.
Also we have told you that some essays are favorite of essay E-rater and get higher marks. It doesn't mean they are really better than others, So you just don't need to do anything with 8.5 or 9.0.
From the feedback by testbig users, a lot of them get 9.0 in reading, listening and speaking (and they think it is a piece of cake), but we never got report from users who scored 9.0 on writing. That means writing is the most difficult one in IELTS test. If your students can get 8.0 in writing, that is a big deal.
ohhhh really ...tnx a lot
ohhhh really ...tnx a lot sir for the guidence .!
May be I am too ambitious ..i am passionate to score 9.0
but I want on basis of caliber not a gift ...
so waiting for the day to come ...trying my best
and sir what about votes that I find under star rating sometime 2 or 3 votes ...what is voting system ???
???????
Sentence: Consequently, mooving towards wealthy continents seems rather more natural than a cunning strategy of west.
Error: mooving Suggestion: moving
Sentence: Furthermore, affulent nations are only defamed becouse of stealing caliber of second world infact, they are assisting to a large number of people to earn their back and belly in a majestic way and offering exposure to eke-out hard currency that further boosts the economy of rising nations too.
Error: infact Suggestion: in fact
Error: affulent Suggestion: affluent
Error: becouse Suggestion: because
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 316 350
No. of Characters: 1711 1500
No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.216 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.415 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.939 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 144 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.871 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.271 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.537 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5