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Nowadays people show more anti-social behavior and lack of respect to others. What are the causes? How could we improve the situation?
Over the past decades, peoples attitudes have altered in communicating. In the past, communications were remarkably based on patience and respect. Unfortunately, in the new generation having honorable behaviors and politeness have shifted into low values manners such as disobedience and ruddiness. There are several factors responsible for the current issue that of those I will discuss about the influence of technology and possible ways of improvements.
Generally, numerous reasons have caused misbehaviors especially among young people of which, the most important is considered to be technolo...
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Sentence: Over the past decades, peoples attitudes have altered in communicating.
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Sentence: Furthermore, most TV series and and soap operas are misleading since they teach impoliteness and ruddiness as a common behavior.
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No. of Words: 303 350
No. of Characters: 1639 1500
No. of Different Words: 189 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.172 4.7
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
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