Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can Government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish production?
Environment of living areas and public places is very significant in the sense that healthy & clean atmosphere is a basic necessity of inhabitants. Neat and clean environment always keeps people healthy. Nowadays environment is becoming more polluted because of heavy amount of rubbish production. In this article I would discuss few reasons which are the main cause of productions of heavy amount of rubbish in our society and role of Government that should be there to reduce it.
By far the most remarkable reason for heavy amount of rubbish increase is the use of poly bags for shopping. People...
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Sentence: In addition, Government can employ a ban on production of all poly bags which is the main reason of increased rubbish.
Description: The fragment poly bags which is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
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