Nowadays congestion and traffic jams are a common and major problem in most cities. Some people believe it is a good idea to construct wider roads to resolve this issue. Do you agree or disagree with statement? What can be the solution in your opinion?
Traffic jam has become a real trouble for administrative authorities and they are trying really hard to find the solution of this terrible problem. In some big cities, wider roads, flyovers and underpasses has been constructed successfully on the busiest main highways for getting control over this awful situation. In my opinion, there are no other options at the moment except widening roads with construction of flyovers and underpasses. In this essay I would discuss how this problem could be resolved.
First main reason of widening roads is that in last decade the amount of vehicles has increased rapidly and the infrastructure has not been maintained according to the needs of transportation which cause traffic jams on major roads. The most relevant explanation of increase in number of cars and personal transport is the change of life style where everyone wants to have their own transport. Therefore, big cities are now implementing master-plan that includes wider roads, flyovers and underpasses to tackle this issue. Furthermore, cheaper price of cars is another factor of why so many cars are adding up in the system on daily basis and considering this trend, traffic congestion would become more pathetic without rehabilitation of existing roads with wider surface.
Another reason of spacious roads is that other alternatives like installation of new tracks for trains would require an entire new infrastructure that will need a huge amount of investment and time that can be utilized in other projects of human well being. Furthermore, it is the easiest and safest way of getting rid-of traffic jams as it would just need additional space on existing roads and re-construction. In addition, there are several other factors like awareness about traffic rules, fitness of vehicles and traffic police system could also be improved for smooth and easy transportation of vehicles.
Concluding this topic, I would strongly recommend construction of wider roads with support of flyovers and underpasses to make it possible that increasing numbers of vehicles could not become a problem for traffic system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, well, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94261417359 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565476190476 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2431493993 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.333333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235853777838 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884121288957 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348654935447 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149096116944 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487737898909 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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