Production of chocolate
well, first of all, i want to say that, chocolate is considerably tastefull food which we consume. so the porduction process of chocolate is more interesting for us.
chocolate is prepared from cacao, special tree which is called the name of its fruit as cacao tree. cacao tree is grown in S.America, Africa, Indonesia with its ripe red pods. first of all, pods are harvested and gathered white cacao beans. production of chocolate begins with fermenting beans. afterwards, the beans are spreaded in sun to dry. after this, they put the beans in the large sacks. these sacks are transported by train or lorry to the chocolate fabrics. in these fabrics beans are roasted at the 350 degrees. after roasting process, they are crushed and outer shell is removed. with special technologies inner part is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.
Sentence: well, first of all, i want to say that, chocolate is considerably tastefull food which we consume. so the porduction process of chocolate is more interesting for us.
Error: porduction Suggestion: production
Error: tastefull Suggestion: tasteful
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