Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern times, for students, there are few things more important than learning a foreign language. There are some who argue that secondary school iss a suitable place for young people to start learning foreign languages. However, in my view, children should be taught this subject as soon as possible owning to some clear benefits.
It is true that supplementing a foreign-language discipline into primary cirriculum have some certain drawbacks. More pressure, for example, would be increase because of imposing schooling time on you children which is not ready to face up with hign demands. As a result, there could be a increase in incidence of student's stress-related illnesses. However, in the vast majority of circumstances, learning a foreign language in early stage of education would have clear beneficial consequences rather than detrimental ones.
One of the most significant advantages of this is that students in primary school still not learn too intensive in mother-tongue subjects; therefore, it could be easier for them to learn foregin language's rules. It is well-know that, in many international primary schools in VietNam, students are taught English alongside with Vietnamese subjects, consequently, not only student's general knowledge is not compromised, but also thier English is relarively good.
What is more, educating a foreign language in primary school give more incentive for students to learn other sciene-related disciplines. Take for example computing, which is always shown in English form, not surprisingly, those who have a certain level of English are more likely to have better results in this subject than those who have not.
Overall, Imposing too much subjects, such as a foreigan language, on primary school would have some limiations; However, these disadvantages are easily outweighed by advantages
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Sentence: Overall, Imposing too much subjects, such as a foreigan language, on primary school would have some limiations; However, these disadvantages are easily outweighed by advantages.
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