Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.
In all world, every worker has a especially salary. Amount of this salary is very different between different kind of jobs. For example doctors, nurses, teachers, artists have many different pay off. Through all worker in world might be artists have most high pay off. Some people think it does not fear for doctors, nurses or teachers.
In my opinion, teachers, doctors, nurses, lowers, judges must have most high salary in society. Teachers has learned or children education, actually raise up future source of our country. Doctors cure patients, lowers an judges create rules and defended justice. All this people do the best thing for people and future of their country. Although, we must notice that, salary of these people paid by government. Every country has a limited budget, a part of these budget use for salary. If government have more budget ,obviously salary of these people has will be increase.
On the other hand, artists, actors, actress or people that have their own company, have very high salary. For example, salary of main actor and actress in Friends TV series, was a million dollar for each episodes. There are some point here, salary of these people it does not permanent like teachers. And also, these people might work one year and do not have work for many years. In additional, earnings of every company it depend on market.
Finally, I believe every service that these people do has especial value. We cannot ignore the value of teachers or doctors in our society. Meanwhile we cannot forget people who do not work for government how hard work.
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Sentence: In additional, earnings of every company it depend on market.
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