Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Nowadays, many people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. However, I personally agree that it is better to make a change rather than always doing the same things.
As we could see, today people are become more enjoy to do the same things. Some people called them as a monotone people. They do not want to make a change for their lives. I think their lives will be flat if they do not do something different. Take one for example, in the past people were using letter or telephone for communicate. However, in this modern era, new technologies were made. There are cell phones to call or text someone. Moreover, there are computers for communicate through email. In fact, there are some people that still think that cell phones are not important for their lives. I think they do not want to make an improvement for their lives. Some people in Indonesia called them out of date, because their mindsets are too old.
On the other hand, there are also any people who think that improvement is a proof. They need to make some changing to their lives more modern. They follow the development of era. Most of young people are think that change is always a good thing. However, sometimes it is not good for us if we always following trends, because we could be influenced from other culture from abroad and I think it is not good for our country, Indonesia.
In conclusion, I believe that changing something different is good things to make an improvement. However, the most important is still stay in our cultures and do not destroy them.
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