Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this essay, it would be explained about positive and negative effect in the lesson from parents and teachers in the school for young people.

First of all, parents have the most important task in educating their children. They have to teach the good thing and to give the advices when their boys or girls make the mistakes. It is done by the parents in order to prevent their kids from bad abilities and can become the useful people in the common environment. Whereas, in this modern era children get less learning from their mother and father. Perhaps, it occurs because their educators are busy. They spend much time for working than educating their kid.

Thus, parents send their kids to the school. They believe that school can change the attitudes of children. They think that school also the best place in becoming sociable people. However, they do not knot know how the felling of their children. Young people who had no attention become naughty to their friends and teachers. They cannot differentiate between good and bad thing. Sometimes they do not want to be taught by their teacher because they are mean and scary. Or actually they do not want studying because they think to play much.

In conclusion, the parent and teacher action are crucial thing in establishing the good attitudes for their children. The parent has more education for their children because they can control them every day. The parent should cut off their activities in working and spend much time for their kids.

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