Some people think that women should take part in the military or the police force, but others oppose to this idea. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and examples.
The topic of gender equality has become a controversial issue in modern society. Consequently, some people believe that more women should be participating in male dominated roles in the military and the police force, while others are against this idea. This essay will examine both opinions alongside appropriate examples and my personal thoughts.
Traditionally, women have been regarded as lacking the physical and mental discipline that many men posses, and as a result women have been avoiding workplaces that require physical labor and strength. Some people find this extremely inequitable, e...
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 297 350
No. of Characters: 1504 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.151 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.064 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.768 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.918 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.355 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.588 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.061 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5