Some people think that women should take part in the military or the police force, but others oppose to this idea. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and examples.
The topic of gender equality has become a controversial issue in modern society. Consequently, some people believe that more women should be participating in male dominated roles in the military and the police force, while others are against this idea. This essay will examine both opinions alongside appropriate examples and my personal thoughts.
Traditionally, women have been regarded as lacking the physical and mental discipline that many men posses, and as a result women have been avoiding workplaces that require physical labor and strength. Some people find this extremely inequitable, e...
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