Some people think that young people should follow the tradition of the society. Others think that young people should be free to behave as individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Tradition is the process of passing on, culture or custom from one generation to other. Some people who are very conservative feel that the younger generation should not turn their face from tradition, while other modern people feel that they should act freely according to their will.
Young generation is constantly exposed to new ideas and get influenced by them. It is mostly criticized that people those who have modern thinking have little or no respect to their tradition. It would threaten the cultural values of a society to be extinct. For instance, youngster who is always following west...
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Sir... Thanks for your
Sir...
Thanks for your advice..
I am planning..
:To remove the however from the third para
:The third para is placed as fifth para.
:Remove , 'i feel that' from the last para ...
It will be o.k....
Thanks once again...
Or I should re-write..?
Tessy James..
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Sentence Length SD: 5.582 7.5
This essay is not well organized because of 'However'. Be sensitive to use However in your essay.
The structure of this kind of essay should be simple:
para 1: introduction
para 2: discuss one view
para 3: discuss another view
para 4: your opinion
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 321 350
No. of Characters: 1604 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.233 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.997 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.602 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.882 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.582 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.561 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.057 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5