The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre after improvements were made to the transport network, and the cost of using different forms of transport in the city.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and bar chart show average journey time before and after improvements from several forms of transport in a city center, and average cost kilometer of using different forms of transport in the city.
There was average journey time before improvements, which were tram, bus, taxi, and car. The fastest was taxi, just 9 minutes. Whilst transport with the journey times was bus and tram about 28 and 22 minutes, car was the uniqueness at 10 minutes.
However, the largest average journey time after improvements was tram with 6 minutes. Bus and car were the next improvement, which reduced 5 minutes. Taxi increased time after improvements from 9 minutes to 12 minutes, but taxi was the fastest transport than the others.
Taxi and car were expensive transport in the city which was average cost per kilometer € 1.80 and €1.00. The cheapest cost was bus around € 0.40, whilst tram was with € 0.45 per kilometer.
Overall, taxi is the fastest transport of average journey times before and after improvements, and is the most expensive cost per kilometer.
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Sentence: Whilst transport with the journey times was bus and tram about 28 and 22 minutes, car was the uniqueness at 10 minutes.
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