the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The expenditure that was spent consist of food, drinks, tobacco, clothing, footwear, leisure, education and the countries that were involved were Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey. The percentage shows that the people in Turkey consumed more food, drinks, and tobacco compared to other countries. In terms of clotting and footwear, Italy shows the greatest percentage which is 9.00%. Finally, in terms of leisure/education, Turkey shows the most consumption which is 4.35%. On the other hand, this table shows the percentage of food/drinks/tobacco as well as leisure/education was consumed by the population of people in Italy and Sweden being relatively close such as food/drinks/tobacco to be 16.36% in Italy and 15.77% in Sweden. Aside from that, leisure/education is 3.20% in Italy and different by 0.02% making it to be 3.22% in Sweden.
In conclusion, this table shows that different people spend and consume on different items. Some countries prefer to spend their money on one particular item compare than the others.
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