The table below shows the rate at which people saved money , expressed as a percentage of GDP , in seven countries from 1990 to 2008.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrate the speed at which people saved money . It also shows this in a percentage of GDP , in seven countries beetween 1990-2008.
To begin with , we can see significant difference in China in 2000 and in 2008. It has been rosen dramatically from 37.3 percent to 53.2 percent . Germany declined untill it got 20.3 percent but after eight years climbed to 26 percent. One of the countries , who has higher percentage of GDP , Singapore had been rosen gradually to only 48.3 percent in 2008 , whereas in 2000 it had approximately 47 percent .
Although there was countries such as Italy and South Korea where percentage of gross domestic product fall down two times out of two. For inctance, South Korea , firstly, decreased from 37.1 percent to 33,6 percent then continued to decrease to 31,9 percent.
However, despite to the status , economic leader of the world , in comparison with others, USA had the lowest percentages among 28 years . In 2008 the country had 12,1 percent , closest country for this amount was Italy with 18,2 percent.
To sum up, we have been convinced that asian countries are more strongly than the
Western countries such as USA and Germany.
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