Technology has facilitated our lives so much and given us a lot of freedom. Some people believe that this freedom has caused more problem for us. What is your view?

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Technology has facilitated our lives so much and given us a lot of freedom. Some people believe that this freedom has caused more problem for us. What is your view?

Technology is a bizz world today, has enabled us more freedom and improved the quality of our lives. There are many people who believe that this freedom has attached more problems for us. In this essay I will discuss why I feel this statement is true.

To begin with,technological advancement is invading our ability to think and work. Now we have technology to do our work, such as mechienaries making us lazy and slacking, lead to lifestyle diseases like hypertension, obeisity, and so on. Women now need to put things in the grinder and press the button, instead of using grinding stone for crus...

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Sentence: The Television make us slough on tha sofa, eat chips, and relax.
Description: The fragment Television make us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense

Sentence: Additionally, cameras in public places impade our freedom.
Error: impade Suggestion: impede

Sentence: The longivity of people are increased due to early doagnosis, fast treatment, and advanced medicines.
Error: doagnosis Suggestion: diagnosis
Error: longivity Suggestion: longevity

Sentence: The trade and comerce are now opened for round the clock, people become over stressed and workacholic.
Error: workacholic Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: comerce Suggestion: commerce

Sentence: In conclution, it can be argued that, life is full of challenges and responsibilities, technology has given us several contributions to make our lives better.
Error: conclution Suggestion: conclusion

flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.958 21.0
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.256 0.35

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 383 350
No. of Characters: 1909 1500
No. of Different Words: 230 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.424 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.984 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.827 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.958 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.179 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.256 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.458 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.113 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5

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