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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK scholl in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise he information and make comparison
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The three pie charts compare annual expenditures of a specific school in the UK categorised in 5 groups in three years; 1981, 1991 and 2001.
To begin with, teachers' salaries had the highest proportion in overall. In 1991 it reaches to its climax by taking the half of expenditures. Moreover, the school paid the least amount of money about 2% on insurance in 1981 which reached to its greatest percentage in 2001 (8%).
In comparison, school spent the highest amount of money on paying salaries to teachers and other work...
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