Time Chart Shows The Participation By Young People In Sports By Gender In Great Britain

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Time Chart Shows The Participation By Young People In Sports By Gender In Great Britain

The bar graph illustrated the involvement of juvenile in sports outside lesson by different sex in Great Britain in 1999. Overall, between girls and boys have balance rates to do outdoor activities except football.

In 1999, the highest activity that males did in Great Britain was football which reached almost 70 participants while woman less than half in 20 rates. On the other hand, youth people showed balance interesting in hiking by up to 20 figures, and at the same time skate boarding demonstrated slightly differences among the teenagers by fewer than 30. Ladies proved high enthusiastic in swimming than boys by reaching up to 50 figures and less than 50 rates for boys. Males prefer to go cycling than females with 5 ranges of number and tennis been in the lowest figures of participant with 23 for boys and under 20 for girls.

In conclusion, football got highest fans to play among the Britain’s youth in 1999. The remained sports showed equal rates among two genders.

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