The two graphs below show the percentage of smokes and the consumption of alcohol in litres in selected countries, for the period 1960 - 2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons
The two line graphs illustrated the proportion of daily smoking and individual alcohol consumption in three chosen countries during four decades, from 1960 to 2000.
Generally, it is reported that Holland topped the proportion of smokers among those three countries in 1980. While the highest alcohol consumption among the countries in the second graph occured in 1980 in Holland.
In the first chart, it is showed that in 1960, the proportion of smokers were 40% for USA, 50% for Japan, and 60% for Holland. It can be seen that overall, they witnessed a decrease of percentage towards 2000, alth...
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