The given first graph illustrates the proportion of smokers in USA, Japan and Holland, while the second graph provides data on the amount of alcohol, which was consumed in litre per person in Turkey, Holland and USA between 1960 and 2000.
Overall, what stands ot from the graphs are that,the amount of smoker people in there countries have decreased significantly over the time period in question,whereas among the three countries, Holland and USA made up the highest consumption, followed by Turkey population representing the lowest and relatively stable.
According to amount of smokers in USA, it accounted for 60% of population and trend plateau till almost 1972 before declining sharply to just 45% in 1980.By following it,the figure decreased steadily to roughly 35% in 2000.Likewise the presentage of smokers in Holland began at 50 and then there was a constant fall and the span between USA and Holland has been roughly same between 1980 and 2000. Finally, the percentage of smoker people in Japan decreased steadily from 40 to namely 20 over the span of year.
Regarding to second graph , it can be seen that,the trend of Holland changed significantly,it commence at 4 litre per person and after that the figure jumped sharply and reached a pick of 12 in 1980.Next, the trend decreased slowly to 10 but this was followed by a plateau.The amount of alcohol which was consumed in USA made up 8 ,after which the trend increased gradually to 10 ,which was the highest level off it.At this point, the figure decreased gradually to 8.Finally, alcohol consumption in Turkey was remarkably low and the result was the almost same to around 1 the time period covered by the graph.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, likewise, regarding, second, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 33.7804878049 172% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 282.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97872340426 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75996388415 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528368794326 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 22.4926829268 249% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.256999857 43.030603864 398% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 280.8 112.824112599 249% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.4 22.9334400587 246% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.6 5.23603664747 298% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 1.69756097561 2651% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101258363127 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060746516703 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030842206174 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704189498924 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277780832717 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 13.2329268293 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.1 61.2550243902 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.3012195122 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.9970731707 222% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.0658536585 217% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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