The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays some people are of the point that one of the most useful skills in a computer is an ability to use the Internet. Furthermore this generation is more developed than previous one because using of the Internet makes our life better and easier. However, not all of these changes bring benefits, because with the growth of the internet use, the number of web drawbacks also rises.
The first thing that needs to be said is that internet is full of unhealthy information which may content antisocial or illegal materials such as political propaganda, pornography and etc. This kind of informatio...
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 274 350
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No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.069 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.978 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.703 2.4
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Avg. Sentence Length: 21.077 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.194 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.648 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.143 0.07
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