Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the table below.
The given table illustrates information on the difference age groups of people who spend their leisure time to watching TV or video, socializing with people, doing individual exercise, doing group sport or going to cinema.
Overall, all younger people seemed to, and are predicted to, be more spend much time to do all leisure activities than their older counterparts. Moreover, all seven age groups showed a differently interest rate in attendance numbers of watching TV or videos during the given period.
To be specific, a longer time of people’s ages of teens and 70s went to, and are expected to, go to the cinema than those in any other age group. Approximately 350 hours from teen age group is also expected to prefer friendship to 4 friends compared with 50s and older ages who only 25 hours. Even in the group that teen group spent 100 hours had the smallest number of teen’s activity, it shown as the highest hours between the older attendances.
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Sentence: Moreover, all seven age groups showed a differently interest rate in attendance numbers of watching TV or videos during the given period.
Description: The fragment a differently interest is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace differently with adjective
it shown as the highest hours between the older attendances.
it is shown as the highest hours between the older attendances.
Attribute Value Ideal
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