Writing task 1 (a letter)
You work for an international company. Recently your job has changed and you believe that more training is needed. Write a letter to your manager and say
- How has your job changed?
- Describe a type of training you will need.
- Suggest the arrangements incorporating training and your work.
Dear Human Resources manager,
My name is Jessica and I am writing this letter to make a request in regards to my new role at this company.
Recently, there has been an internal promotion and I have been put in charge of international accounts management team.
Previously, I have only had to understand an accounting software which is used by all local clients. However, as a result of recent promotion, now I will have to gain basic knowledge on other accounting softwares that are commonly used by international clients. Competency in these programs will allow me to accurately understand and audit our company's international clients business operations. Therefore, I would like to receive regular training sessions for these software programs for the next three months.
I am available on every monday from 2pm until 3pm, however I can adjust the time depending on the trainer's schedule. Please confirm if this arrangement is suitable as soon as possible.
Kind regards,
Jessica
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-26 | Mariamirabella | 78 | view |
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flaws:
No. of Words: 153 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 153 200
No. of Characters: 761 1000
No. of Different Words: 107 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.517 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.974 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.922 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 57 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.166 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.417 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.708 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4