The bar chart shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a third year Computer Science course at a Canadian college.
Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the number of enrollment for Computer Science course at a Canadian college by students from 5 different speaking countries.
Overall, the China has the largest number of enrolled students (17) and France has the smallest (5). Singapore and Sri Lanka both have 12 students; Malaysia has 11. It is noticeable that Singapore and Sri Lanka have similar profiles. Majority of female students enrolled in a Networking as a core option except for France, there is no female enrolled in Networking courses while male students enrolled in Database as a core option.
Students from all five countries are enrolled in Database, but more males are taking this option than females (21 and 9 respectively). For each nationalities, male students outnumbered females, except for French students with 3 females to 1 male. The China has most students studying database (9), Sri lanka is 7, Singapore is next of 6, followed by Malaysia and France of 4 each.
As for networking courses, more females enrolled than males from every country except France. In fact, there are no female French students enrolled in networking courses. Only the same male number of 1 student each enrolled in both courses (database and networking).
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-01-31 | kaka singh | 73 | view |
| 2017-12-05 | milanree1527@yahoo.com | 84 | view |
| 2015-09-16 | YS89 | 70 | view |
| 2015-01-09 | lumika | 50 | view |
- Some people believe that violent sports such as boxing or whitewater rafting should be banned because they endanger the lives of the sportsmen. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 87
- The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010 70
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes 58
- As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. 75
- The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 43
Sentence: For each nationalities, male students outnumbered females, except for French students with 3 females to 1 male.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and nationalities
Sentence: Only the same male number of 1 student each enrolled in both courses database and networking.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to courses and database
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 201 200
No. of Characters: 997 1000
No. of Different Words: 101 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.765 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.96 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.713 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 84 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.273 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.538 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.445 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.656 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.183 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4