Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people put forward the idea that smoking is not only detrimental for smokers, but also for those who stand close to them. So smoking have to be forbidden in public places. I fully agree with this statement and in the essay I will give some reasons for it.
it is obvious that smoking is harmful, however not all of us know that passive smoking can be more dangerous than active one. Especially it is risky for children and for pregnants. active or passive, both of them lead to to lung cancer and other diseases. Ban will slightly decrease amount of cancer and air pollution and increase health of nation.
Opponents can say that it is decision of passive smokers to inhale the emanating puff when they stand near to smokers, so they have to take responsibility for their choices and not restrict others freedom, however opponents forget that they also take choice from other people when they smoke publically. Ban of public smoking will not mean that individuals can not smoke at all, it means that there will be few areas where it can be permitted.
Even if forbid of public smoking will be detrimental for business particularly for bars, pubs and clubs, government shoild make a resolution to make smoking in public areas illegal. Because between healt and wealth of small group of people it has to prefer nation's health and safety.
In conclusion, ban is necessary for well-being of citizens, even if it has bad impact on business. Forbid to smoke publically will not mean prohibit smoking at all or smokers will not have a place to smoke, there will be smoking zones where individuals have right to smoke.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78014184397 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47634551472 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528368794326 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9845680361 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.692307692 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280414095691 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100399159645 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859147951716 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171584832883 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617847298329 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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