The bar chartillustrater an amount of people in UK who gave money to charity in the term of age group over a twenty-year period between 1990 and 2010.The overall view is that the age of people from 18 to 65.
To bigin with, What stands out from graph, in 1990, the group of 36-50 years old had the biggest amount of people giving money to donation with 42%, followed by the group 51-65 years old with 35%. The figure of the groups 26-35 and over 65 were respectively 31% and 32%, which doubled percentage of people between 18 and 25.
In compration, in 2010, 51-65 provided money to charity rose approximately 40%, this meant it had the highest amount of other groups in that year. Meanwhile, the figure of 36-50 years old significantly decline to 35 %, which stayed equal with the group of over 65. As is shown, there has the lowest rate to be seen again in the group of 18-25 with 7 %.
To sum up, It can be clearly seen, there was a dramatic upward terd from 51 to 65 over two decades.
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the age of people from 18 to 65.
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51-65 provided money to charity rose approximately 40%
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the figure of 36-50 years old significantly decline to 35 %
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Sentence: The bar chartillustrater an amount of people in UK who gave money to charity in the term of age group over a twenty-year period between 1990 and 2010.The overall view is that the age of people from 18 to 65.
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Sentence: To bigin with, What stands out from graph, in 1990, the group of 36-50 years old had the biggest amount of people giving money to donation with 42, followed by the group 51-65 years old with 35.
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Sentence: In compration, in 2010, 51-65 provided money to charity rose approximately 40, this meant it had the highest amount of other groups in that year.
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Sentence: To sum up, It can be clearly seen, there was a dramatic upward terd from 51 to 65 over two decades.
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