The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales( in various formats) of film from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart portrays the total number of rentals and sales of films of a variety of formats made annually by a particular store from 2002 to 2011.

Based on the chart, one of the most striking features is that the rentals on the films were decreasing over the years. It dropped significantly from 2002 to 2011 in which the annual number of rentals in 2002 and 2011 were 185,000 and 58,000 respectively. Apart from that, the VHS sales were also declining gradually since the year 2002. Its sales was above 80,000 in 2002 and it was surprising to note that by the year 2006, its sales was zero.

As for the DVD sales, the bar chart shows a significant rise from the year 2002 to the year 2007. The number of DVD sales in 2002 and 2007 were around 50,000 and above 210,000 respectively. This shows a four-times increase in term of DVD sales between 2002 and 2007. After experiencing a peak in DVD sales in 2007, the particular store experienced a gradual drop thereafter. This drop was followed by the invention of Blu-ray in 2007 in which the Blu-ray sales began to rise till the year of 2011. According to the chart, the DVD sales in 2011 was above 180,000 while the Blu-ray sales in the same year was below 20,000.

In overall, it is noticeable that the number of rentals on various formats of films and VHS sales were dropping dramatically whereas the DVD sales was increasing initially and followed by a gradual drop over the years. It is shown that the sales of Blu-ray was taken place since the year 2007.

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'apart from', 'as for']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223728813559 0.268076937826 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.128813559322 0.116061578633 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0474576271186 0.0759168565197 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0406779661017 0.0366838410393 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0203389830508 0.0131127313244 155% => OK
Prepositions: 0.186440677966 0.155750635184 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0440677966102 0.0379272487307 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39294831806 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0203389830508 0.0210936926555 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.132203389831 0.0948980150116 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00677966101695 0.00967000014798 70% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1525.0 1161.00487805 131% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.9 140% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54545454545 5.90752243213 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73763899035 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.232727272727 0.337110787985 69% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.181818181818 0.247514529752 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.105454545455 0.171178102325 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0727272727273 0.112407865282 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39294831806 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4 0.546246751206 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.1679276304 49.3433353143 75% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 8.93414634146 146% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1538461538 23.0094962315 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6050405557 42.9750493124 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.307692308 135.714022679 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 23.0094962315 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.689975730869 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 39.3356643357 47.7609492067 82% => OK
Elegance: 2.39285714286 2.94281807926 81% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.566320824419 0.418131533498 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.196680894057 0.181151798455 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0807298313039 0.0850326197045 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.658803496601 0.706616315825 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147481803502 0.157042692854 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.292440045219 0.228904883108 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942513558348 0.108899403657 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.505353619318 0.367819155151 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0861783318277 0.0812612215331 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.454869447108 0.316326947829 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340051783328 0.0921553760075 37% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 7.1512195122 182% => OK

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Rates: 70.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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