The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed anually in the same areas.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a visual providing an overview concerning about the amount of the world's oil resources held in diverse areas combined with the proportions consumed anually in the same areas. According to the horizontal bar charts one of the first fact to note in the former is that the percentages of annual oil consumption is overwhelmingly greater almost in all areas to compare with the percentages of areas in the first chart.
From the first glance at the visuals it is readily apparent that Middle East is the highest in terms of reserving a great deal of oil resources whilst Australia and New Zea...
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agriculture land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990sSummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make 70
- The diagram below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 70
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- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
they both higher than the rest of the areas
they both are higher than the rest of the areas
Sentence: Given is a visual providing an overview concerning about the amount of the world's oil resources held in diverse areas combined with the proportions consumed anually in the same areas.
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Sentence: Although there is a slight difference between Eastern Europe and Africa in terms of oil resources, moving on to the chart oil consumption one can discern a conspicious divergence between them in oil resources Eastern Europe is 6.58 and Africa is 6.38 , in oil consumption they are 6.56 and 3.35 respectively
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