The first diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm from days to days and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
The first diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm from days to days.
The first phase of the silkworm process is the eggs. Within 10 days the eggs will become silkworm larva that used mulberry leaf as their place to leaf and their food simultaneously. In 4-6 weeks ahead the larva will have silk thread around their body and it takes 3-8 weeks to become cocoon. The cocoon will then become a moth in 16 days and this is the last phase of the silkworm process to become a moth.
The second diagram shows the stages in the production of silk cloth. There are at least five steps in order for cocoon to be produced of silk cloth. The first is selecting best cocoon larva. Not all cocoon larvae can be produced for silk clothes, there are some requirements in it. The second stage is boiling the cocoon in certain amount of water. Then, the cocoon will be unwounded and the twisted by using certain equipment. The last is to weave the cocoon.
To conclude it, there are some phases and stages of the silkworm process to become a moth and so with the cocoon to be processed as silk cloth.
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In 4-6 weeks ahead the larva will have silk thread around their body and it takes 3-8 weeks to become cocoon.
In 4-6 weeks,the larva will have silk thread around their bodies, and it takes 3-8 weeks to become cocoon.
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