A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1 give contact details for when you are away
2 give instructions about how to care for your pet
3 describe other household duties.
Hi Mike，
Thanks for letting me know you are able to take care my house and dog while I am on holiday. And I am writing this letter to suggest some instructions about how to look after the dog and my house.
I am going to Thailand with my girlfriend on 30th August. At the moment, I don’t have Thailand mobile phone number yet, but I m sending you my email address, because I am easily reply your email if you have some questions about my house and the dog. My email address is Xiamen@gmail.com.
About my dog Tantan, he is a Japanese male dog with long hairs. Firstly, the hairs need to be cleaned once a week, otherwise he might be grow some insects. Besides that, you only need to offer food every second day because I have a big food container. Lastly, I wish you can take Tantan to walk in the park sometimes, if you have spare time.
In addition, my house is a very simple two bedroom townhouse, you only need to clean the dropped hairs from Tantan once a week, that will be enough, Thanks so much for your help, I am really appreciate it.
Let me know if you have some questions about how to handle my house and Tantan.
Cheers
Jeff
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- A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter1 give contact details for when you are away2 give instructions about how to care for your pet3 describe other household duties. 71
while I am on holiday
while I am on holidays
because I am easily reply your email
because I will easily reply your email
otherwise he might be grow some insects
otherwise he might grow some insects
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 216 200
No. of Characters: 889 1000
No. of Different Words: 123 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.851 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.041 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.113 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 49 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 29 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 14 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.442 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.363 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.764 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.248 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4