Dear Sarah
I hope you're well. I'm just writing to thank you for accepting my proposal to take care of my house and pet in my absence, and want to let you know some instructions related to them.
Actually, I'm going to Goa for a week, and will stay at 'Windsor hotel' in Vasco De gama in city. In case of any emergency, you can contact at Hotel receptionist phone number, or you can make a call to my personal mobile number which will you find in diary which I've placed on the table in lobby area near the landline phone.
My dog 'Tommy' is very friendly, so you don't need to be afraid from him. You just have to give him warm milk in his bowl two times a day as he don't drink cold milk. Also give him water time to time so that he can not face dehydration and get proper nourishment.
Another duty I want to give you that you have to watered my plants on daily basis at the morning time because they easily with withered due to scorching heat of these days, and make sure maid also groom at Park regularly so that extra leaves can be composed easily.
Keep in touch.
Tom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sarah I hope youre well Im just writing to thank you for a...
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Dear Sarah I hope youre well Im just writing to thank you for accepting...
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...tructions related to them. Actually, Im going to Goa for a week, and will stay ...
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... My dog Tommy is very friendly, so you dont need to be afraid from him. You just ha...
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... milk in his bowl two times a day as he dont drink cold milk. Also give him water ti...
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Suggestion: Also,
...times a day as he dont drink cold milk. Also give him water time to time so that he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11239726903 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652380952381 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6436617258 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171378772493 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642912106996 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543164276894 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104812279271 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560552884506 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 70.7449484536 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.38 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.