The graph below show the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph illustrates age 65 and above population growth in USA, Sweden and Japan from year 1940 to 2040, a hundred year prediction. Overall, these three difference countries seem to have the similar increase over the period of time.
In 1940, the USA was taking almost 10% higher than the other two countries, whereas Japan 5% and Sweden in the middle approximately 7%. By the following decades, from 1960 to 1980, Japan was gradually declining while USA and Sweden remain increasing to 15% in the year of 1980.
Between year 2000 and 2020, USA remain unchanged but Japan sharply rise double time over the previous decade at 10% higher. In contrast to this growth, Sweden dramatically falls from 20% to approximately 17 per cent in 2030. However, USA, Sweden and Japan finish at higher level which Japan is 27% highest than USA, Sweden take middle rate with the percentage of 25.
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The line graph illustrates age 65 and above population growth in USA, Sweden and Japan
The line graph illustrates population growth for people aged 65 and above in USA, Sweden and Japan
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The essay doesn't match the line graph exactly . for example:
the USA was taking almost 10% higher than the other two countries,
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