This is a graphic representation of the significant roles played by three different categories and their effect on the national finance and currency flow in united kingdom in the previous century. Among the three -agriculture, manufacturing and business- it can be clearly seen that agricultural projects dominated when considering the overall contribution, followed by manufacturing and lastly business related jobs.
Within the first half of the century the trend was almost similar, the highest attribution was from farming with almost half of the percentage. Followed closely in terms of financial input by factory works by around 45 percent in the early decades. This witnessed a slight reduction in the fifties. Throughout the whole first half financial and business did not account for more than ten percent.
The next 50 years showed a substantial rise in the marketing and company businesses which reached more than 30 percent by the end of the studied period. The other two sectors were decreasing quite variably and eventually manufacturing stopped at 10 percent while agricultural activities were almost negligible.
To sum up, agriculture and factory works commenced high but finished at variably low values. In contrast, free business and finance began initially at very small numbers only to dominate the whole picture in the end of the stated period.
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors-agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services-to the UK economy in the twentieth century.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons 70
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