The graph below shows radio and television audience throughout the day in 1992.
Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the fluctuation percentage of radio and television audiences (over 4 years old) from October to December 1992 in soon and midnight.
Overall, it is clear that the number of people (over 4 years old) going to be radio audiences increase in soon at 08.00 P.M with 28% but after that drop gradually, and the same time television audiences only 6%. the amount most higher of television audiences in midnight at 08.00 A.M with 48%, after that numbers decline and the same time also numbers of radio audiences only 8%. In the same time at 02.30 P.M not only radio audiences but also television audience the number of them fall significantly with only 2%.
So the main features both of them is in soon the number of radio audiences more than television but in midnight the number of television audiences more than radio audiences.
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in soon and midnight
in noon and midnight
the number of people (over 4 years old) going to be radio audiences increase in soon
the number of people (over 4 years old) going to be radio audiences increases in noon
not only radio audiences but also television audience the number of them fall significantly
Description: two subjects in one sentence: 'not only radio audiences but also television audience' and 'the number'
the main features both of them is in soon
Description: two subjects in one sentence: 'the main features' and 'both of them'
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
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