A letter to the manager of a sport center that is about to close

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A letter to the manager of a sport center that is about to close

Dear Mr. Manager of Bac Lieu Sport Center,

I am Le Cong Tuan - a regular member of your center, who does badminton and chess every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday evenings at your center. I am writing this letter to express my great concerns about the possibility of closure up our center as I learned about the bad news from other center’s members.

I think we are quite enjoying ourselves at the center. On your part as center manager and owner, you are doing a good business, attracting a lot of people coming to practice and train in several sports. On our part as sport players, we are impr...

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