The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The statistical table explains what a difference data of subway systems in unsimilarity cities. There are six cities exactly where a subway has started from 1893 in London, then become the oldest and the longest a subway, with distance of route at 394 kilometers. Then, for the most passanger was Tokyo with 1927 millions people used a train for journey in a year.
In another cities such as Paris and Tokyo which these cities overtook to begin transportation by a train after London. For Paris opened in 1900 where by 27 years after that Tokyo started a railroad system. The distance of railway line, Paris had at 199 kilometers with 1190 millions daycoach in a year whereas Tokyo had shorter line at 155, however subway is used many people there.
Next, in Washington DC, a railway system was stood in 1976 with 126 kilometer of line and amount of daycoach was144 millions per year. At the same, for Kyoto city and Los Angeles city opened a railroad system in the late 2000s which Los Angeles was newer to appear it than Kyoto. For amount people used train as public transit almost similarity, and from data was Kyoto the lowest of passangers at 45 millions people in a year.
Train is popular transportation for Tokyo city, in other side, it is little used in Kyoto that a subway avalaible in recently than another cities.
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become the oldest and the longest a subway
become the oldest and the longest subway
for the most passanger was Tokyo
for the most passengers, it was Tokyo
In another cities such as Paris and Tokyo
In other cities such as Paris and Tokyo
however subway is used many people there.
however subway is used by many people there.
Train is popular transportation for
Train is the popular transportation for
that a subway avalaible in recently than another cities.
that a subway is more avalaible recently than that in other cities.
Sentence: The statistical table explains what a difference data of subway systems in unsimilarity cities.
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Sentence: Then, for the most passanger was Tokyo with 1927 millions people used a train for journey in a year.
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Sentence: For amount people used train as public transit almost similarity, and from data was Kyoto the lowest of passangers at 45 millions people in a year.
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Sentence: Train is popular transportation for Tokyo city, in other side, it is little used in Kyoto that a subway avalaible in recently than another cities.
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