Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
In Indonesia, nowadays, many people to do anything's, then many choose to do something. Because, our country have accessibility for know many information's in internet. With have accessibility to can get many knowledge, make some people to do anything. Such as, in Jakarta have many place and activities to do, because many people rival to get work, study, and other employment. Then their prefer to cacth what do want it. If, their can make it happen for what to need or want it, people well ready to get it. Moreover, make people change's about their life to can move to better place or anything. But some people can't move for better their life's, their stay in convertation zone, and make many peopledont do variaty activities. Many people think, their will prefer to spending time doing the same things, and many people think make a change's for a good think.
In Jakarta have very much activity can do it, but many people think to stay with the same activity. Because, people no need improve and adaptation in new environment. Moreover, people do activity more better with the same activity, example when people work or have comfrotable a job for their, if their stay and spend time for a long time, will make improve and easy to work. Next, for people think to do a change's to spend their time to find a new activity make people can exploration and grow in very much situation. Then, make many friends and have many skill. For instance, people move or have many friends exactly their many activity to spending time.
In any case, stay in zone comfrotable can make people have many problem solving, if their find many problem in their life. Because people stuck in the relathionship with friends and anything. For example, people have two friends and just stay in their environment, their can't grow better because their can't get many time and communicate with many people orr friends. Than, if people have plan to spending time, their can't make relathionship. For intance, if many friends their can't to close with all their friends.
Then my opinion about many people want to stay and a change in their ive's, back to personality. Because each human is different.
In conclusion, people can make a change to spend time and many people stay in comfrotable zone, that's choose many people. My solution, about that, we should be improved our skill and problem solving to do anything. We can find with my rule and my way.
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Sentence: Because, our country have accessibility for know many information's in internet.
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Sentence: With have accessibility to can get many knowledge, make some people to do anything.
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Sentence: Then their prefer to cacth what do want it.
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Sentence: Many people think, their will prefer to spending time doing the same things, and many people think make a change's for a good think.
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Sentence: Moreover, people do activity more better with the same activity, example when people work or have comfrotable a job for their, if their stay and spend time for a long time, will make improve and easy to work.
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Sentence: Next, for people think to do a change's to spend their time to find a new activity make people can exploration and grow in very much situation.
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Sentence: In any case, stay in zone comfrotable can make people have many problem solving, if their find many problem in their life.
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Sentence: In conclusion, people can make a change to spend time and many people stay in comfrotable zone, that's choose many people.
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Sentence: Then their prefer to cacth what do want it.
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Sentence: But some people can't move for better their life's, their stay in convertation zone, and make many peopledont do variaty activities.
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Sentence: Moreover, people do activity more better with the same activity, example when people work or have comfrotable a job for their, if their stay and spend time for a long time, will make improve and easy to work.
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Sentence: In any case, stay in zone comfrotable can make people have many problem solving, if their find many problem in their life.
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Sentence: Because people stuck in the relathionship with friends and anything.
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Sentence: In conclusion, people can make a change to spend time and many people stay in comfrotable zone, that's choose many people.
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