The table shows how young people in Tokyo,Japan,listened to music over the previous month.The pie chart shows a record company's international findings about whether people preferred live or recorded music.
The table below reveals the information about live and recorded music for both genders across four selections live music, MP3 players, Internet and CDs in Tokyo, Japan. It can be clearly seen that the most part of males preferred to MP3 players while the most significant amount of females chose live music.
It is a straightforward fact that the least part of males used CDs for listening around 19%. The highest point was recorded inMP3 players with a hefty 79 percent. The second lower point was recorded in Internet (55%) and progressing through live music (60%).
It can be clearly seen from pie chart that people was interviewed over the previous month about which kind of music do you prefer live or recorded and the vast majority of people answered the question and just a tiny minority of people (4 percent) did not give any answer for question. Live music was preferred by the overwhelmingly majority of people (70 percent) and over one in four of people said that they preferred recorded music (26 percent).
To sum up, the table and pie chart suggest that the mass migration of interviewers promoted MP3 player while a tiny minority of people chose CDs in both sexes.
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