The two maps below show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities.Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the schematic representation of the two islands prior and after the structures were constructed.

Let us take a look at the first island. It is almost barren and the area that will easily catch anyone's attention is the part of the beach, the sea and some of the growing coconut trees that are present in this place.

However, after it was reconstructed. Now, there is a restaurant situated near the sea shore, and to be specific it is so accessible to accommodations. Next to it is the reception area, where it shows that the planner who did it.Meticulously imagined how ...

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