You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community.However now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working.
In your letter
describe the work you have been doing
Explain why you can no longer do this work
recommend another person who is interest in the work
Dear Mr. Smith,
Hope that all currently running voluntary works are going well. I am a member of the welfair society who reside in the temple road. My name is Lasika Kalpani.
I am working on all the computer related stuff and managing the treasuray for the upcoming events. And I am desinging the poster for annual carnival and organizing media coverage by contacting the media coorperations. And also I am delegating the teams for the tasks which should be done in the carnival.
Unfortunetly. I am unable to continue this work in upcoming carnival since I am busy with my carrier life and I got extra responsibilities from my leads.Not only that I need to travel for India for 3 weeks and as a result of that I can not attend for the daily meetings.
I would like to introduce one of my cousin sister who knows all my work and I have shared all the contacts with her and she also having strong organization skills and willing to work with our society.I will introduce her to you in next weekends.
Hope you can understand my situation and work with the replacemant that I have assinged for my work.
Thank you.
Yours Sincerely.
Lasika Liyanage
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I am a member of the welfair society who reside in the temple road.
I am a member of the welfare society and reside in the temple road.
and she also having strong organization skills
and she is also having strong organization skills
Sentence: I am a member of the welfair society who reside in the temple road.
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Sentence: I am working on all the computer related stuff and managing the treasuray for the upcoming events.
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Sentence: And I am desinging the poster for annual carnival and organizing media coverage by contacting the media coorperations.
Error: coorperations Suggestion: cooperations
Error: desinging Suggestion: designing
Sentence: Hope you can understand my situation and work with the replacemant that I have assinged for my work.
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Error: replacemant Suggestion: replacement
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