You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation. Write a letter to the accommodation officer including the following information:
the type of accommodation you wish to find
some details about yourself
any special requirements you may have
and any other relevant information.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I received an email confirming that I have been allotted a seat in Masters of Information and Communication Technology in your university, starting in September. I am writing to you in regard to arranging an accommodation for the same.
First, I would like to provide some information about me. I am 21 years old and my student ID is 985986. I am from India and lived here since my birth.
Since I am new to Australia, I would prefer on-campus accommodation initially for six months. This will allow me time to understand the culture and localities around campus. I understa...
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