You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to1. Explain the reason why you decline the offer2. Express you gratitude3. Explain you like your current job very much.Y

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
1. Explain the reason why you decline the offer
2. Express you gratitude
3. Explain you like your current job very much.

You should write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir,

Dear Sir,

I was a potential employee to whom you made a job offer. I would like to extend my thanks for such an offer, especially at such a company as yours. It is, however, with deepest regret that I must decline your generous invitation and apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused.

I appreciate immensely the interview organized by your company and the extensive effort made by all the staff involved. Their attitude was impressive and highly commendable. As such I must pass my sincerest apologies for any difficulties related to the extra work that must have been involved, and th...

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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 175 200
No. of Characters: 818 1000
No. of Different Words: 112 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.637 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.674 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.798 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.583 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.783 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.63 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.076 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4