Your friend and his/her family are moving to your hometown. Write a letter to him/her to provide information about the town and say- What types of housing are available in your area.- Give information about the schools in your town.- How they can meet and

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Your friend and his/her family are moving to your hometown. Write a letter to him/her to provide information about the town and say
- What types of housing are available in your area.
- Give information about the schools in your town.
- How they can meet and get to know residents living in this area.

Dear Tony,

I hope you all are keeping well so far and everything is fine here too. I am really very glad to hear that you are going to move to Melbourne soon with your family, as we can see each other very often in near future. Well, let me provide you some information about houses and schools around my local area.

There are several houses available at the moment for rent through both private and real-estate. Most of the houses are recently build and that have got all the latest facilities, such as air conditioner, study rooms, undercover car park, enough back yard. However, it is a bit...

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