Your friend wants to start a new business of import and export. He is confused with products in which he should deal with. Write a letter to explain him
What type of product he should import and export
Why these products beneficial
And your interest in his business
How are you? Hope you are doing well in your current business. I am writing this letter to guide you on the import-export business that you want to start as you do not have enough experience of it.
As per discussion earlier, I know that you are desperately wanted to start new import-export business. I am in this business since 2010. So I think that I should provide you some valuable tips on it. Currently in this business, products such as branded clothes, jewellery and leather items are in demand. You can earn huge profit by targeting rich customers. Also nowadays competition in this business is less. So I think that you should first focus on these products for your new business.
As a friend, I always with you and if you want to make partnership with me in this business then I warmly welcome you. Your management skills and my business experience can give us huge success. Please think on my offer and let me know your decision. Give my regards to your parents.
Yours lovingly,
Pratik Patel
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 175 200
No. of Characters: 804 1000
No. of Different Words: 105 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.658 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.492 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.557 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.933 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.444 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.388 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.577 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.239 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4