The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

It's clear that both countries France and the UK spent the most money on goods is cars. Moreover perfume is the least good that consumer from the UK spend least on and cameras is the least goods that France spent on.

The amount of money that France spent on cars is 400,000 pounds sterling but the spent for the UK is slightly higher which the amount is 450,000 pounds in sterling. Both countries spent approximately 350,000 pounds sterling on computer but for the amount of spent France is slighter higher than the UK. The comparison amount of spending on books is that France is much lower than UK of 100,000 pounds sterling different, since the UK is much higher.

Overall there are least of spent from each countries which is that perfumes is lowest expends for the UK while France is slightly higher and for the expend on cameras France is much lower than the UK.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... spent the most money on goods is cars. Moreover perfume is the least good that consumer...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...while France is slightly higher and for the expend on cameras France is much lower than th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce is much lower than the UK.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6858974359 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16984102164 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 63.0 106.607317073 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403846153846 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6590536512 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0683400878258 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504539886696 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484938821498 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647713657242 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596716607986 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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