about changes in 1995 and in present time

Essay topics:

about changes in 1995 and in present time

The given maps indicate significant changes of a given illustration without and with the development of new infrastructures. At first glance it is easy that provided the construction of facilities, the city has modernized into a fascinating tourist attraction.
As shown in the map there are advanced facilities built, there were only a few houses in 1995 and in present there are more houses constructed. After years of contracting, there are apartment houses while in the past there was a fish market in the west part of the city opposite to the restaurant in the present whereas at the place of the restaurant in past were shop complexes. And also there is a hotel in the south east part of the city and there is no change but after some years it is completed by the car park near the hotel.
As shown in the illustrations, farmland and forest park was changed to the golf center and it increased by area and also added tennis courts in the present day. And in the present housing process is going up more than that of year and there is a street that was cutted at the present time. It could be painly viewed that in the south part of the city there is a sea and in 1995 there was a fishing port and in the present there are no fishing ports.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as modernized into a fascinating tourist attraction. As shown in the map there ...
^^
Line 2, column 360, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
... at the place of the restaurant in past were shop complexes. And also there is a hot...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42608695652 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6239553687 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.8707221551 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232695400307 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940984297424 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603788284535 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146453800122 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919766734766 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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